The Journey to The Black Church

Do u remember my words in ur previous works? if yes....u'll understand my comment here

In this case no no U idea was great.......but all is confused! Of course i'll try to explain u with my bad engl hahaha

Remember always this thing! All need to be clear and well visible or easy to see......otherwise u'll create confusion!! Subjects and background are sacred! In this case the subject is almost invisible because he have the same tones of the rocks and he havent details....so he is totally flat!!! about castle all ur foreground and back ground is confused because those dark tones and strong contrast...flat all!! Dark is ok because the source light is on background...but u can create detailed enviroment using darkness and without flat all too! Those ray beam are impossibles!! Multiple ray beams are possible when for example they through multiple windows..and not is this case! They are impossible also because the source light is central!!!
bat and moon are + or - ok!
Don't worry about all those mistakes! They are normals...and they are so important and sacred!! Only thx to them we can grow!! For this reason respect always them and be happy always to find them!!
Im happy always when i find mistakes in mine works If u want control better lights and shadows......learn to use camera raw -----> [link]

See u next my new friend!